The track's called Untouchable... plz take a listen and give me some feedback... hope you like it! thanks

edit: here's the link.. i forgot...
http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2977/2977714.html

Last edited by J.L. on Dec-24-2002 at 01:50

*bump*

any comments??

lol where's the link?

Yeah, we do need a link.

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oh... i'm stupid


http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/2977/2977714.html

here ya go..!

uplifting,i enjoyed it

I like the track! Cool cute melodyes (remindes the style of your previous track)!


any way it lacks something.... it has that old-skool feeling to it (
for example the melody at 1:40, but steel cool and dreamy
I wish i could create melodies like these )
maybe play with the arrengment...
2:29 the synth i guess takes over too much...

very melodic...but again it doesn't sound pro enough.......

happy producing!
Flotser

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thx for everyone who's commented...
BayouRoach: I'm glad you like the melody
Floster: Thanks for your feedback... you always give detailed comments on my songs and i really appreciate it..

DLing right now... will comment later on!

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ill listen 2 it now...

OK... The emotions in this are good, the major minuses are that low synth that comes @ ~2:15 and is waaaay too loud, and the kick, that isn't tryving enough IMO, need more volume and maybe some compression.

Also, I would make most of the synths more dominant, and add a bit more hihats work

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