i pretty much like this one, although i would advise you to tweak the middle frequencies a lot + the bassline need to be a lot clearer in my opinion (maybe reduce the delay/reverb from it + eq also could help) the track lacks in body, otherwise, the kick is really good, i like the melody + effects, those are really your strong points,

all in all, i like this a lot, just need to fix some things on the bassline + mixing, and it will be all good,

Peter

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Last edited by Mycron on Apr-21-2005 at 13:30

Nice track there. The break is awesome, good pads and that synth is more then ok. Good job mate

Thx Amfora, i'm glad you like it

Hey. Wow, exquisite track layout.

-It could be extended a lot so theres more of a club intro into the song but not bad. (edit: sounds like this is a demo, statement revoked.)
-I really like this first synth you lay down though. Its a very pleasing sound.
-The break is just as awesome.
-Some masting could be done to enhance the clarity of the track.
-Good use of pads.

All around, sounds as if it could be a really nice track. Your last shots have been pretty impressive Romi. It's always nice to hear what you have up for downlaod from week to week because I dont think I've heard a track of yours that I didnt like .
Grade A

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- overall, i like the beat/hats/bass - very energetic
- in the break, those delayed melodies in the background should be louder, because they sound really nice
- there should be more tension before the kick comes back

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Thanks for the comments Mycron, IDarkISwordI and eulerfx. Yes, i agree with most of the critic you guys are talking about. I definatly take a look at those things such as the mastering and a better tension before the climax (i'm also not totally happy with that now, not fugured it out yet how to make it better, any tips?) etc, thanks for the tips.

@eulerfx: Which delayed melodies in the break do you mean exactly, is it the leadmelodysynth or another one?

Last edited by Romi on Apr-22-2005 at 06:47

0.30 nice pads. ...ohhh la di daa..... beautiful stuff

1.25 Great selection of bass.

1.36 there could be a break beat entering here. & then build up to the bass drum with a drum roll...

2.25 nice.....oh it finished

beautiful sounds in this track Romi

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nice pads and use of vocaling,i liked it much.
puts meto sleep :P

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Thanks again for the feedback. If you guys want to listen to a more complete (lq) version, it's now on AP, here's the link:

http://www.acidplanet.com/artist.asp?PID=430598&t=3996

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