Hi everyone

I finished my 2nd production today.

Here's the full track (untitled yet )

Opinions are welcome.

http://users.pandora.be/chuanweb/mu...ay-untitled.mp3

heh.

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hmmm....end is werd.....hmmm, don't know what to say about this, is this your 2d track,...of all time? or 2d "single"?

2nd own production (not inc. remixes)

I like it...

I Also like the melodyes... The melody at 3:50 sounds femiliar to me, dont know from where... (matbe i already download your track before )..

again, cool melodic track.

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I like the title It's good (specially for a 2nd tune, so I suppose you're beginning now)... sounds like pvd, but... hhhmm... try to make it less "happy", you know what I mean? My first tunes were quite happy too, so I found a way to know whether the melody is too happy or not. Everytime I compose a new melody, I ask to myself: Does it feel like I'm dancing with Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck? If not, I go on with it Got the idea?

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Originally posted by Maaz Everytime I compose a new melody, I ask to myself: Does it feel like I'm dancing with Mickey Mouse and Donald Duck? If not, I go on with it Got the idea?

nice track
really reminds me at PvD

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Pretty nice... the bass should be much, much louder, also I think that you should change at some point the sound which plays the chords at the back, it would bring more depth to the track. Nice effort for your second track!

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you have talent my friend. the only advice i can give is work on your mix and production more. if you are still beginning at this it will get better every track you do anyway. the only other thing is try to be a bit more original and not clone pvd.

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doh...I didnt think of PvD when producing this

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Originally posted by dEEkAy doh...I didnt think of PvD when producing this

rofl...nice track btw.

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