I like "moments" better, it's so peaceful. And I find the intro of "red clouds" a bit weird... you should wait a bit longer to come with the melody, I guess. By the way, are you really in Brunei? Sweet

thanx a lot
more feedback pleasE? hehe

moments is much better than red clouds, which is a bit boring.
intro on moments is a bit fucked if youre expecting any djs to want to play it... its a bit muzak-y as well. try and build some better rhythms to go with your track and go from there. they are a bit one dimensional.

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i don't want to be really critical but Moments sounds a bit too much like dance music around the 2-3 minute mark.... i feel it has a lot of potential too.. overall i think it's a good chill-out track...


I didn't like Red Clouds... I don't want to be harsh, but if you make something that you(or others) feel isn't very good you should just scrap it...

like for example... you start off a new song... you are working on it... and halfway through it, you just don't see any direction that your song is going... so what do you do? scrap it... it's sort of hard to let go of all that work but if you can't really make anything work with your song it's best to just let it go and start off fresh...

i have a lot of songs and ideas that i've just scrapped because i felt they sucked...

hope that helps you!

while many dont agree with you RE: the dance
simile arround min 2-3 i do thank you for the
rest of the feedback !

appreciate it !

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Originally posted by kewlness i don't want to be really critical but Moments sounds a bit too much like dance music around the 2-3 minute mark.... i feel it has a lot of potential too.. overall i think it's a good chill-out track... I didn't like Red Clouds... I don't want to be harsh, but if you make something that you(or others) feel isn't very good you should just scrap it... like for example... you start off a new song... you are working on it... and halfway through it, you just don't see any direction that your song is going... so what do you do? scrap it... it's sort of hard to let go of all that work but if you can't really make anything work with your song it's best to just let it go and start off fresh... i have a lot of songs and ideas that i've just scrapped because i felt they sucked... hope that helps you!

agreed.. but dont bin them... i some times work on 3 or 4 ideas at a time.... 1 might get finished properly

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March 12th 2005 - Becomeone @ (Sub) Logic, London (w/ Oliver Leighs, Simon Rutherford)
April 7th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ JFK and Liam Bamford)
April 9th Wildchild @ The Empire, Milton Keynes (late minute replacement for Brisky)
April 16th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Jonnie Pickering, Simon Patterson and Judge Jules)
May 5th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ Riley and Durrant, Liam Bamford)
October 15th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Simon Patterson, John O'Callahan, and Judge Jules)

thanx a lot people
and look forward to "sand"
will be released soon!!!

hope that will be up to the standards hehe

Again I thank you

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Originally posted by modular agreed.. but dont bin them... i some times work on 3 or 4 ideas at a time.... 1 might get finished properly

ye never trash ideas...

always save them... just change what key its in and new ideas may come!

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