WHHHHHOAAAAAAAA!!!!!

AMAZING TRACK!!!


i also think you dont have to worry sbout the vocals, they blend in well ,
maybe you could tweak the melody aliitle (or gate t or somethin) when it comes again around 4 minutes...but i'm not sure.

i wish you so so much luck man!

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I'll see what I can do with the melody. What exactly do you mean with gating the melody?

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gating, i meant put a gate on the lead synth, i'm sure you know what it is

but now, that i listen to it again, i wanna take those words back, i guess gating will do no good here, its perfect the way it is. it just was seen to me at the first time that when the main melody comes again at 4 minutes, it sounds the same as it was at 1:50... i just though you can make it alitle diffrent the second time.
but again, i'm realy new to this, so i dont know what i'm talking about here.

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Oh I see... Well I'm planning on editing the second buildup a little, it is indeed a bit the same as the first one (same filter cut). Thx for the tip

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its my favourite of yours yet!!! kill the vocal tho...its evil and distracts from a great tune

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sounds great wim... i kinda like the vocal, but it could have been recorded a little better

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modular : thx man, i kind of promised the one who recorded the vocals he'd be in it though... but i could always fix an instrumental mix of course

dbl : glad you like it. the vocals were recorded by a friend with a simple mic and creative sound recorder... but i'll try to manage it better for the next mix.

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I like it. Melody, bass and beats are all excellent, but yeah, the second build up needs some variation.

As for the vocals... I don't like them at the start, but the one-shot vocals are quite good. Make the starting ones a lower pitch or something, to make them sound more 'haunty'.

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no problems with the energy at all. i just don't like the melody, it's rather cheesy IMO. you've done better..

love the spooky vocal, though.

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i'd say this be a good "cheesy" tune to rock those clubs out there.. indeed energetic.. but cheese is not a factor when it comes to your productions, on the contrary it's rather excellent..

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right, this sounds well ace!

you definately need much more grungy bass, this is a lightworks bass, and is nowhere near phat enough

i would also say this definately not cheesy, maybe the vocal makes u think that but its not!

i think the kinda breakbeat bloop noise that comes in at 0:48 is excellent, but it needent be used later in the track, sounds in all honesty quite poor when there is proper percussion and no melody like around 2:49 but sounds ace when u use it as a breakbeat thingamajig

as you have said, it needs a proper build, to mix with and stuff this is gonna be ace when it's done, u never cease 2 amaze me wim

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