i like this, alot!
very very good mate

Very impressive, I like it as well!

sounds very good bas! (=blue arctic stars, i dont know your first name) i like your build up, and nice synths used. sounds pro!
there's only one thing that bothers me and that is that at the points where the melody 'starts again' it doesn't sound right..hmm in english it sounds shit, ill explain you in dutch

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zow ik vind de punten waarbij het melodietje weer opnieuw begint zeg maar niet helemaal lekker in elkaar overlopen..(bij 4.44 bijv..)nou weet ik niet of je de hele melodie zelf nagemaakt hebt (zou ik heel knap vinden!), maar ik heb zelf ook wat gekut met de midi file en het 'loopen' van de melodie was mn grootste knelpunt..
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the first part of the break where you filter the strings is too long..or not needed at all..maybe you can try cutting that part out of it? or just start with the strings as they come in from the 4.44 spot
anyways, i like this remix a lot..like it more then h&h's, except for that one thing i mentioned in dutch great work,
keep it up!

john

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1. 4.43 sounds wrong. And the loop of teh strings i dont think is necessary, i think the melody should begin there.

2. I think there is some interference noise in teh strings when they first come in.

3. I really like the synth, is it subtractor?

4. Bassline is mint

5. The breakdown could be abit more immense

6. A great remix. Really enjoyed it! Well done!!

Really good remix! Powerfull lead , I like that!
Breakdown could have been more interesting tho...but it's still very good!

Well done!

nice remix man

some things:

the claps are a bit 2 loud imo..
i really like the sort of breakbeat in it
nice atmospheric sounds!
strings sound a bit strange..
main lead is very good

u did a very good job on this.. sounds very proffesional!

grtz,

dj mantis

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Wow!

First of all, thank you for the great replies! I read your comments carefully, and I'm currently improving the remix. I cut the first part of the strings and I tried to improve them. I'm also improving the breakdown, because many people say it's a bit "boring".
The new re-edited remix will be available soon! So keep updated!!

Cheers!

Blue Arctic Stars




To DaveC: Yes, the main lead is substractor

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amazing remix, I'm very impressed...as well as your song "illumination", which I liked as well....good job m8

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Originally posted by arctic the server is down @ the moment

Yep that's right

I have edited the remix, and it's back online. I fixed the things mentioned here, and I hope this one sounds better!

Download HERE:

http://music.texasbeatz.net/produce...oxiation.tk.mp3

Enjoy!

-Blue Arctic Stars

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very nice, one thing i don't like is the clap, it's not too loud, but it doesn't fit in