Please give your Comment on my new track. Your opinion is also welcome!!

If you think that i have something to change in my number please say it because maybe i can learn of it i´m by the way 15 years old!

you can download my track at:

ftp://ftndj:[email protected]%20Summer.mp3

Thanks a lot,

greetz Rene aka Dj-Fortection

PLease Give Some Comments.

Thnx Dj Fortection

Well first of all you have to provide a faster place people could download this from because its too slow...


As for your tune, I think you have a good solid base for a good tune, nice melodies, but I can't think of it as a finished track because it sounds too empty.
Try to add some pads in the backround, lower the reverb on some of the parts in the track.

that explosion fx is too simple, too empty, you need to streach it abit more..

I really liked the melodies but that ain't all in a track, try to add another synth line in the backround, like a 2nd melody, that will add alot to the melody itself.

2:31
didn't like at all
it sounds like its off tune or something like that...



hope you won't think i'm too harsh, but you wanted a comment and you got one

goodluck in the future mate.

Hello!!

Maybe tweak the synth in the begining alittle, it sounds too metalic in a way.
I like the Melody, but i guess you should make the melody synth wider!

but as gil said, its kinda empty, put has a potential to become a very good, i would say, hardtrance track.

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Hi ,

Thnx for comment.

Greetz Dj Fortection