have made a new track and would love some comments on it to improve myself

HERE it is (rightclick/save as)

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Daniel

Hello!!

I love the Begining, also love the bassline!! (is it ok to do the bass line on so high frequences?)
The percisuin is also great!!
The main synth 2:00... its cool, but i guess that darker synth would fit better in that dark track
2:40....you fade the synth to to low volume i guess

angain, overall, the track is great, but the main melody seems maybe simple, ant too happy...just an aprerigator playng some notes, but again, i think with darker synth it will sound better.
4:30 ... love that athmospere!

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Originally posted by Flotser Hello!! I love the Begining, also love the bassline!! (is it ok to do the bass line on so high frequences?) The percisuin is also great!! The main synth 2:00... its cool, but i guess that darker synth would fit better in that dark track 2:40....you fade the synth to to low volume i guess angain, overall, the track is great, but the main melody seems maybe simple, ant too happy...just an aprerigator playng some notes, but again, i think with darker synth it will sound better. 4:30 ... love that athmospere!

thank's.. i was thinking about the bass too, but i hope it's ok
will fix the fading later today.. thank's for the tip.

the melodie might seem a bit simple, but that was the best i could come up with atm.. i have no inspiration at all when it comes to melodies... might just have a bad time atm
and it's not an aprerigator (or how it is spelt).. i have done the notes myself...

thank's for the comments.. much appreciated

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Daniel

anyone more??? 30 looks 1 post

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Daniel

Downloading it now mate, but the server it very slow...

I'll be back once I have it, I promise

Greetz,
Wim/LW

Edit : finally I got it
I really liked the intro and fx you used, they're nice. Basslines fits well too. Good atmosphere that builds. But I don't really like its melody... sorry
All the rest is very fine, only the melody could be more interesting, or some twists to it perhaps.

Keep up the good work!

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Last edited by Icone on Jan-20-2003 at 15:28

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Originally posted by Lightworks Downloading it now mate, but the server it very slow... I'll be back once I have it, I promise Greetz, Wim/LW Edit : finally I got it I really liked the intro and fx you used, they're nice. Basslines fits well too. Good atmosphere that builds. But I don't really like its melody... sorry All the rest is very fine, only the melody could be more interesting, or some twists to it perhaps. Keep up the good work!

thank's alot wim....
i have a serious problem with melodies atm.. no inspiration at all
i tryied to do something more with it, but everything just went straight to hell so i keept it like that... might redo it someday with a better melodie.. if i get some inspiration that is

but i'm glad you liked the rest

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