as you guys may or may not know, I've gotten into producing a bit of trance over the last year. Only the last month or so have I been making decent stuff, and I am hoping to release some stuff now that I've got some more free time than usual.
I got started on this track yesterday, and just finished up another 2 hours of work. Probably the nicest track I've created, and now I'm looking for feedback
Please be honest, and let me know what you think of this sample. I can take criticism as long as its constructive.
I would post in the production forums, but its hard to get feedback there.
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Feb-11-2003 04:06
LKD
Omni-peasant
Registered: Aug 2001
Location: Its June 18th, 2005, I'm at the Skybar
omg..i havent downloaded yet..but THANKGOD SOME PEOPLE KNOW THT OGG VORBIS EXISTS
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Shimokawa, Hokkaido, Japan
I downloaded it, first opinon was it was pretty good, i liked it, hehe kinda short, but good, i will give more feed back tommrow, i am dead tired tonite, but good job.
Feb-11-2003 04:40
Matt
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by Tudo Beleza
I downloaded it, first opinon was it was pretty good, i liked it, hehe kinda short, but good, i will give more feed back tommrow, i am dead tired tonite, but good job.
well duh its short... its a SAMPLE :P
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Feb-11-2003 04:41
Tudo Beleza
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Shimokawa, Hokkaido, Japan
quote:
Originally posted by Mosaic
well duh its short... its a SAMPLE :P
hehe i am so tired, i can not read english, i am amazed i can write english at this moment.
so i should have said, nice SAMPLE, can not wait till it is a TRACK
Feb-11-2003 04:57
Matt
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by Tudo Beleza
hehe i am so tired, i can not read english, i am amazed i can write english at this moment.
so i should have said, nice SAMPLE, can not wait till it is a TRACK
heheheh thx
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Feb-11-2003 04:57
Elmo-On-XTC
Pea... Tear... Griffin
Registered: Sep 2002
Location: Toronto, Canada
ok I listened to it a couple times...I think it's a very good sample. It has many of the elements that make a good trance track. My advice (just advice get a couple more opinions before you do this maybe), the main riff that comes in at like 6 seconds, I think it should exit at about 54 seconds, and not re-enter till the buildup at around 2:17 again. It get a little repetative how that riff is structed right now.
Still it's better than anything I've produced I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup!
Feb-11-2003 18:13
Matt
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Toronto, Canada
quote:
Originally posted by Elmo-On-XTC
ok I listened to it a couple times...I think it's a very good sample. It has many of the elements that make a good trance track. My advice (just advice get a couple more opinions before you do this maybe), the main riff that comes in at like 6 seconds, I think it should exit at about 54 seconds, and not re-enter till the buildup at around 2:17 again. It get a little repetative how that riff is structed right now.
Still it's better than anything I've produced I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup!
okay cool, I'll try some of your ideas.
that crystal/digital riff you are referring to is the latest addition to the track, so I haven't experimented with it a whole lot. I love the way it sounds with the lead synth during the chorus... but not as much during the intro.
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Feb-11-2003 21:06
kwongandy
Supreme tranceaddict
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Toronto
the main riff sounds too acidic for the track, i think it should be softer. as it repeats, it dominates your melody a bit. other than that, it's structured pretty well.
Feb-12-2003 02:54
TheNeonAlien
Techno Sensei
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Toronto
what app opens oog files?
Feb-14-2003 04:53
infinity HiGH
groovin
Registered: Oct 2001
Location: west side T.O
quote:
Originally posted by DJ El Kay Dee
omg..i havent downloaded yet..but THANKGOD SOME PEOPLE KNOW THT OGG VORBIS EXISTS
i know what ogg vorbis is :-|
Feb-14-2003 04:55
TheNeonAlien
Techno Sensei
Registered: Oct 2002
Location: Toronto
Mosaic ,
send a link to download this app plz
Thanx
I've been fooling around with fruity for a couple weeks, I use samples though, which I kinda wanna stop doing, but anyways awseme track! I really like the brakedown & buildup!
