please check it out and tell me what you think. also im trying to get it in the melodic trance top 40

http://artists.mp3s.com/artist_song/3175/3175565.html


thanx people

___________________
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/s...iousukmusic.htm

Wow, very good mate. The melody is uplifting and chilling at the same time, but imo it resembles a bit to Solar Stone : Seven Cities
Anyway,very good work. I think you can reach the melodic trance top 40.
Keep it up !

___________________

I chase dreams... you chase me...

This is very good, very good indeed!

The main melody is really epic

Keep up that style!

thanks guys it starts off like seven cities yeah, then changes completely with the new melody that comes in, it has influences from a GTA3 soundtrack as well - from Rise FM, LOL i bet ya know which one i mean if you play it

its highest position so far was 59 in melodic trance on the 4th, thanks for the chart boost as well.

___________________
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/s...iousukmusic.htm

Not bad mate! Nice chilling feel overall in the track. I'd use a more distinct bassline though, or increase its volume. Kicdrum is a tad weak too, perhaps change it.

Keep it up!
LW

___________________
Icone / Van Gelder / Blue Manta / The Elemental

Icone Home
Icone Store -> New Percussion SAMPLE CD here!
Icone MySpace

cheers wim! i'm making a remastered version of this track soon, with some more sound fx too, like seaguls and waves in the breakdown. i'll knock the eq back up a bit on the kick and bass i think, i wasnt sure before and i was making it on a bassey system.

i'll get chance to hear your new tune tomorrow at college, not much i can do on 56k, specially when it keeps cutting me off

thanks for the feedback!

___________________
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/s...iousukmusic.htm

Excellent,
I really like this track,

Beutiful melody, a bit of treaking here and there & it could be a real hit

Keep it up

___________________
linktr.ee/lostlegend

cheers bren, really glad you like it. any other suggestions on ways which i could tweak it that i didnt mention above?

___________________
http://www.soundclick.com/bands/2/s...iousukmusic.htm

quote:

a bit of treaking here and there

hhmm what the hell does treaking mean ?
maybe I should go back to school

I meant 'Tweaking' of course

___________________
linktr.ee/lostlegend