what do ya think of it?
i posted it as an addendum to my last snowblind thread but it got no comment as the thread was about snowblind.... but id like to know what ya think of this tester version!
Modularesque

it was created, like all of my tunes, here!

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ok the review:

your track got lots of potential: really great phat ( phased )lead sound and catchy melody.

What I don't like is the bassline: it takes away lots of the power of the track.
You should perhaps take another one, faster: listen to the all time classic: Arrakis - the Spice and perhaps then you know what I mean: the bassline is really carrying the track forward.

You got a really cool melo and fxs, but to become a floorfiller you really should make another bassline.


Trancevision

The synths in this are really good.

I don't see the problem with bassline. Perhaps change it and see if it seems better.

Excellent work.

nice track man, i agree with trancevision on the bassline tho.. could be much phatter! the whole track could use some more power aswell.

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i wanted the bassline to throb rather than have a fast bass cos i think the main push style lead has enough going on in it once it gets to lift off point to lift the track (its gonna have more filtering in the next version. this ones only a test run.

one thing i do notice in peoples reviews of my tracks is that they can seem to spot the soft synths a mile off. the only soft synth in this track is the bass synth.... hmm... curious..

points taken... im gonna get the waldorf pulse on bass duties now.... soft synths have failed me once again...lol

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My Next DJ Dates
March 12th 2005 - Becomeone @ (Sub) Logic, London (w/ Oliver Leighs, Simon Rutherford)
April 7th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ JFK and Liam Bamford)
April 9th Wildchild @ The Empire, Milton Keynes (late minute replacement for Brisky)
April 16th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Jonnie Pickering, Simon Patterson and Judge Jules)
May 5th 2005 - Existence @ The Met Lounge,Peterborough (w/ Riley and Durrant, Liam Bamford)
October 15th 2005 - Serious @ The Cross (w/ Simon Patterson, John O'Callahan, and Judge Jules)

Some potential in this track. I have some suggestions if you'd care to listen.

First of all, the bass drum is REALLY weak. This track definitely needs some power and the kick would provide that.

Secondly, as mentioned above, the bassline really needs to be changed, its very weak as well.

Thirdly, that percussive click sounding thing is way too loud, its drowning out a lot of the other sounds.

The synth that comes in at 1/4th of the way through the track has too much panning for my taste. I would personally give that and the main lead less seperation.

And at last, i'd give the track a little more bass (though this is eventually going to be fixed with a new bassline/drum) and reduce the highs a little.

Keep working on it!