the sound quality is ok, but i dont know if it is just me or is there some dischordant sounding stuff in there with some of the strings and voice sound. the track gets a little better around 4:20, but there is a loud pad sound that is a little too loud i think.

i dont know if you want dischord in your song (that isnt usually the case with trance), but if you fix the dischordant notes (especially the voice sounding pad) the then this track will sound a lot more together and be more pleasurable to the ears.

also, that sound that comes in and delays a bunch starting at 5:40 sounds like it should be a different note as well.

the track is not all bad though, there is some very nice melodic sounds underneath, they just need to be enhanced by reinforching notes with your pads and such.

it sounds like you havent been producing that long, so this is not too bad. just keep at it and you will get better. peace.

-rob

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Yeah I know
have to fix some things
what do u mean with dischord? notes at the wrong key?

anyway thx for the comment!

greetz

Dj Vylix

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yes, thats probebly what he ment, i also think that that spooky voice sound doesn't fit in, otherways its a nice tune.