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aye wicked bassline.. well groovy 
i think the synth u have at 1:35 is good, but i think with a little eqing it could be better. the synth thats comin in at 1:59 is immense, well done!
the vocal u use is very good..
i dont think theres anything wrong with the melody, i like it.. especially in the breakdown.. im getting goosebumps i think it just needs to develop the synth thats goin in the background that does 5 stabs.. evolve it into a longer melody i think 
nice stuff again tho, get this mastered and it will sound mint 
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