Hello.

http://nb.zerion.com/yia_waterserpent_b.mp3

please, have a listen and leave your impressions, before i embarass my self in front of platipus and the like. ^_^;;

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Originally posted by yia Hello. http://nb.zerion.com/yia_waterserpent_b.mp3 please, have a listen and leave your impressions, before i embarass my self in front of platipus and the like. ^_^;;

I will have a listen to it in the morning for you off to bed now .

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im dlin/listenin to it now, i got just over 5 mins of it.. and i must say the start is very, very, very cool only one snot to pick though, the breakdown bit should maybe come a few bars earlier ooh... here we go... nice breakdown! i think it could do without that bass-line coming in there.. maybe a tad later... DOH! it cut out just before it kicked up!! That always happens...

ill let u know what i think of the whole thing when ive got it all (shitty 56k) but up to yet its gettin a good 7 or 8/10.. very nice, very uplifting.. i think the TA peepz will like it.

peace

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ok ive listened to it all now, i still think that bassline comes in a bit early on that breakdown and towards the end it doesnt seem to fit anymore, but all in all its scored a 7.5 on the tune-o-meter... great track, progresses wonderfully. U wont be embarassing urself in front of platipus and the likes...

peace

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thank you for the kind words =D

i think i will make it shorter. do you refer to the off-beat bassline, or the acidic bassline?

if you use buzz, would you like the source file?

the off beat one at the end of the tune... at the very end on the final beat from about the 9 minute mark

what i mean about it not fitting anymore is the notes dont seem to go together anymore.. dunno why, maybe u need to either drop it a few notes completely or phase it down a bit just for the ending though the first bit sounds fine as it is

i dont use buzz though sorry :|

peace

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Last edited by tu_face on Jun-13-2001 at 23:03