Hi, tell me what you think of this track. i just finished it

Blair V - "Let it Stay"

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thanks very much to sirocco for the space!

Last edited by wookieslut on Jun-18-2003 at 06:20

rar i love the melody.

the track has a chileld feel to it but its not chilled.

neat sounds and reverbed synths and shit sound very cool.

unique.

7/10

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OHH my god this rocks, i listened to it 20 times in a row it had me dancing like this

I really enjoyed this. You should work on it a bit more to get it perfected. When I mean working on, I mean mastering and such..

You got something good going here. I like it.

JaY

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downloading it right now and getting my ears ready

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sounds pretty professional, yeah just master it and you'll be good, theres that one sample in there that sounds like its being overwhelmed by everything else but other than that there is nothing i can hear that is wrong. good job man!

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i lAAAAv just need some bass tweaking and its all set!

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Sounds great, has massive potential, keep building on it.

i downloaded it twice, and in both times it stopped transferring at 81%


sirocco - if jay tripwire IS your dad, can you hook me up?


alon

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Originally posted by Psy-T i downloaded it twice, and in both times it stopped transferring at 81% sirocco - if jay tripwire IS your dad, can you hook me up? alon

try again
i was in the middle of uploading a new version

percussion is nice, although i hate the snare drum,
the pad line seems a bit not in place, (changes its notes on weird locations)
the piano line is nice but a bit too dirty (a really tiny bit)
and then the beat comes back but again,,, not in "correct" timing.

other then that.......i dunnow, nice track



(i hope i wasnt too harsh)

alon

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Originally posted by Psy-T percussion is nice, although i hate the snare drum, the pad line seems a bit not in place, (changes its notes on weird locations) the piano line is nice but a bit too dirty (a really tiny bit) and then the beat comes back but again,,, not in "correct" timing. other then that.......i dunnow, nice track (i hope i wasnt too harsh) alon

thanks for the advice, ill see what i can work on