This is a result of 3 years of practise..!

http://www.besonic.com/User/0,1391,...i668208,FF.html

it is a little long, but it is very Bonzai style,

some feedback would be appreciable

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http://soundcloud.com/subtara

in my own humble opinion its crap..listen to br f's stuf, how nice it sounds..your is muffled and the synths have no character, i wish I could help but im only learning myself..as it stands its pretty bad dude..

Hey don't worry man its not that bad. Just seems to not have a whole lot going on, but then again thats a style too - like in-a-trance- trance. I like the plucks, the mixing seems to be pretty good, etc.

By the way dude - copyrighting is easy! All you have to do is contact almost any local government general info line and they'll tell you how to contact your country's copyright office, and from there its a matter of some forms and a small fee. Besides that, even if you didn't copyright the work, its a bad idea to say so right on the dang page heeheehee. If you're in the US you can go to http://www.loc.gov/copyright/ for all tghe forms and stuff.

Cool!!

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khalalala member #2

hey man, i have to things to say about this track. the melody is alright, but for a 10 minute song, its kind or repetative. i would try adding some other leads and mix it up, or shorten it some, or do some more work with breakdows/buildups. and also, the sound quality isnt that great. i dont know if you posted it at a lowere quality so it would be a faster download, and if thats the case, i'd like to hear a higher bit-rate version. and if not, thats not something that can be fixed with mastering. you dont really have any high end. i usually compress and eq each individual sound. to give you an example of what this ends up sounding like, listen to this:

http://www.tranceaddict.com/forums/...threadid=110786

this was made with reason, nothing else, using compresion and eq on each synth and the pecussion. hope this helps.

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