i like the nice beat in there, but i think that the main sound needs some more work. its also a little repetative, but its good for your first attempt at trance.


on a side note...thanks for the luzon track...i liked it, but the vocal was a little weak for obvious reasons hehehe...

thankx...yea...got alot of werk to do on the melody. will keep werkin on it.


bout the luzon rmx. i actually touched up the vocals, made em louder, but dont remember if thas the one i upped to iuma..

link updated with a bit more werk on the melody, the beat, and percussion...

hey proto,

nice beats, i like that deep bassline, but try to pann the perc's a bit more, they sound a bit flat, and maby more perc's, you should make it more techno style than trance with that deep bassline.

ok i think your on your way man.. just need to spend some time now eq'ing that thing.. and make a better lead for it. I dont like the harder bass sound towards the mid end of the song.. but thats just personal taste. Take some more time out and bring out the elements that sound good like the percussion.. and go techno with it definetly that bass is just not tranceish.

Well Good Luck
~alphablue

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more percussion it is!!!

hahaha. thankx for the comments guys. yea...i was werkin on a counter melody, but then came out that weird techno bassline....lol...i guess i'll add some more percussion to the tune and switch it to a bit more techno. the melody is obviously, bein werked on