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magnasoma
TSN - The Gamemaster

Registered: Mar 2003
Location: London
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Jun-26-2003 10:11
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DJ Mikey Mike
Your mum's face

Registered: Jan 2002
Location: I'm at your mums'
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Jun-26-2003 10:42
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jinxed84
product

Registered: Nov 2001
Location: Slightly South of Seoul
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you asked what we think, so im gonna tell you 
the "splinter" text has some wierd ass blur on it, might be slightly contradictory when thinking in terms of word conotation (splinter; sharp, ouch, wtf im bleeding) but the text looks all soft and fuzzy(a la bunny rabbit) almost hard too read might i add.
the pink... ive seen too much abstract weirdness and its getting old. maybe make it more of a definite image. if youre gonna do abstract wierdness, or distortion make it have something about it that says hey im uber at photoshop not, hey im copying some gimmick on every sig out there. if you cant get the blurry stuff to look good, dont use it
the girl: wtf is up with her eyes, shes got one normal eye and one....not normal eye ewww is that devon aoki(sp?) but thats your choice(maybe find another pic of her)
sorry to be harsh, but it looks like youve got some talent, and thats a decent start but i think you could make it better(especially with the typography). try to make a smooth flow from left to right, as of now its a little harsh and seperated, that thing ont he right side with the opacity turned way down is severly detracting from the flow, the image goes(from left to right) abstract blurry>>more solid and definite>> more blurry foolishness. its jarring take that thing out of there and make the right side more solid.
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Last edited by jinxed84 on Jun-26-2003 at 16:53
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Jun-26-2003 16:41
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Nabistai
WodkAddict

Registered: Sep 2002
Location:
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| quote: | Originally posted by jinxed84
you asked what we think, so im gonna tell you 
the "splinter" text has some wierd ass blur on it, might be slightly contradictory when thinking in terms of word conotation (splinter; sharp, ouch, wtf im bleeding) but the text looks all soft and fuzzy(a la bunny rabbit) almost hard too read might i add.
the pink... ive seen too much abstract weirdness and its getting old. maybe make it more of a definite image. if youre gonna do abstract wierdness, or distortion make it have something about it that says hey im uber at photoshop not, hey im copying some gimmick on every sig out there. if you cant get the blurry stuff to look good, dont use it
the girl: wtf is up with her eyes, shes got one normal eye and one....not normal eye ewww is that devon aoki(sp?) but thats your choice(maybe find another pic of her)
sorry to be harsh, but it looks like youve got some talent, and thats a decent start but i think you could make it better(especially with the typography). try to make a smooth flow from left to right, as of now its a little harsh and seperated, that thing ont he right side with the opacity turned way down is severly detracting from the flow, the image goes(from left to right) abstract blurry>>more solid and definite>> more blurry foolishness. its jarring take that thing out of there and make the right side more solid. |
lol Burn! 
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"I hated going to weddings. All the grandmas would poke me saying "You're next". They stopped that when I started doing it to them at funerals."
| quote: | | Het doel van een heel deel hier is niet over muziek te praten maar door zijn deelname aan discussies een zo groot mogelijk intellect proberen aan de dag te leggen en daarmee een rare vorm van zelfbevrediging in werking stellen. 'It's a strange world' |
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Jun-26-2003 18:08
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Spad
wise sage of the forest

Registered: Jun 2001
Location: Chesterfield ,UK
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| quote: | Originally posted by jinxed84
you asked what we think, so im gonna tell you 
the "splinter" text has some wierd ass blur on it, might be slightly contradictory when thinking in terms of word conotation (splinter; sharp, ouch, wtf im bleeding) but the text looks all soft and fuzzy(a la bunny rabbit) almost hard too read might i add.
the pink... ive seen too much abstract weirdness and its getting old. maybe make it more of a definite image. if youre gonna do abstract wierdness, or distortion make it have something about it that says hey im uber at photoshop not, hey im copying some gimmick on every sig out there. if you cant get the blurry stuff to look good, dont use it
the girl: wtf is up with her eyes, shes got one normal eye and one....not normal eye ewww is that devon aoki(sp?) but thats your choice(maybe find another pic of her)
sorry to be harsh, but it looks like youve got some talent, and thats a decent start but i think you could make it better(especially with the typography). try to make a smooth flow from left to right, as of now its a little harsh and seperated, that thing ont he right side with the opacity turned way down is severly detracting from the flow, the image goes(from left to right) abstract blurry>>more solid and definite>> more blurry foolishness. its jarring take that thing out of there and make the right side more solid. |
Ouch 
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Jun-26-2003 18:17
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