anybody?

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Listening.

Nice kick. bass is a bit muffly. Percussions lacks a bit of drive, where are the open hats ?

The effects are nice.

I feel the track is on repeat here. seems u play the same sequence all over again.

Overall, good idea you have going, but percussions could use some more layers, and additional synth work could be needed, for more variation.

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I like only bassline the melody is good

but this is musical chaosssss

I know this is your "phase"

Greetings
Karol

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thanks for the comments guys!

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try adding loops, techno loops, bongo loops anything. its really plain now.

the base needs equing

also the track has no structure, immagine trying to mix it.

i like the cheeky sound of the baseline.....

if i where you i would find a track i like, then try and mimic all the sounds, i.e the intro, build ups etc....

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