I had some ideas for making a tune with Reason. This is the result. Can someone give this one a listen and tell me if it's any good.

http://www.xs4all.nl/~metsel/basslijn22.mp3

ps: It's my first time so don't be too tough on me.

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Nice project you've got here.

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Ik geef ff comments in het Nederlands.
Ik zou wat reverb/panning delay op de synth(s) doen. Dit geeft je track wat meer atmosfeer en klinkt het voller. De bassline klinkt best goed btw. Lekker diep.

Succes verder!
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sounds pretty cool for the first time =)))

it gets kinda messy at the end... the melody is way too simple

too many high pitched sounds create the feeling of a soundtrack for Nintendo game or something =)

the bassline is really cool...i liked it, has that technoish feeling in it... the drumline and percussion line are also very nice...

It's your first track, so dont worry... u will improve with each track u create... in about a year, u will be creating amazing tracks and thinking "wow, i just made it...im famous!!"

lol

very nice, keep up the good work

You're on the right track mate. My first song was nowhere near that good. The final song should be a bit longer though.

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