Hi,
Nice intro...Very nice pads somewhere at 2:10
But I think you should work more with your bassline.It needs more power and low frequences. You kicks could be louder as well
And yeah...you track needs a full remastering too.
well I supouse you're just beginner at producing so you gonna get more experience very soon.
Good luck !

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Originally posted by Fractal Hi, Nice intro...Very nice pads somewhere at 2:10 But I think you should work more with your bassline.It needs more power and low frequences. You kicks could be louder as well And yeah...you track needs a full remastering too. well I supouse you're just beginner at producing so you gonna get more experience very soon. Good luck !

First of all thanks for replying ..
second, i always wondered where/how i could do that remaster thing, which program is the best? and maybe you can help me cause i have no clue hehe

Cheers.

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Hm...
For mastering I use WaveLab.Listen to my stuff and look how it works
Another good program is Sound Forge but I don't know very mutch about it because I just don't use it
But very important thing is to tune the volume of each instrument so you can hear all of them.
For example I think that the pads in your track are too loud so you should reduse their volume and as I said before your kicks and bassline could be louder.
Try different things and listen to some commercial tracks from time to time and compare its sound and yours
Well I hope my comments will help you in producing.

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Originally posted by Fractal Hm... For mastering I use WaveLab.Listen to my stuff and look how it works Another good program is Sound Forge but I don't know very mutch about it because I just don't use it But very important thing is to tune the volume of each instrument so you can hear all of them. For example I think that the pads in your track are too loud so you should reduse their volume and as I said before your kicks and bassline could be louder. Try different things and listen to some commercial tracks from time to time and compare its sound and yours Well I hope my comments will help you in producing.

Thanks !!!! i'll give it a try and maybe i'll pm you for questions , by the way, hows the track generaly ?

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Any one else with comments, pls ?

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Come on, is it realy so hard to DL+reply if its bad or whatever ? i've seen 1000 people browsing this section + replying to other stuff, why does it have to be diffrent with new producers such as me and some other i wont mention , ok so our " tunes " aint so brandy and mindblowing compare to other pro producers we have here... so what?

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Thanks Fractal for the comments btw im trying now how to remaster my track even though i have no clue how i'll play with it abit !

Cheers everyone.

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It's ok man
I understand you completely. I have the same problem
Nobody want post their comments.Well... we can't force them to do that

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i can't dl this as the link seems to be broken

i will download tomorrow and give feedback!

get t-racks for mastering!!!!!!

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Fixed the link Joest !
Thanks JhonOC, i havent catched the mastering thing yet, i need someone to direct me abit cause i dont realy know how to use it properly, anyway i'll purchase that t-rack

Peace.

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