The intro is nice and happy. Its missing something, or its giving away too much too soon. Try to be a little more progressive with your intro, more of a monotone sound to build anticipation for the break.

Breakdown sounds nice, like that synth. Its not very powerful but it fits the track.

After the buildup, when everything kicks back in, you let the melody play WAY too long without automating much or introducing new elements.

The track is nice and simple but has some flaws in the structure. Right now its about a 7/10.

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i'ma bump this back up because its such a great tune. the melody is deep and driving. really cool dude. never been disappointed by u. another solid tune from u. everything seems to be where it should be, only one complain...@ 3:33 there is a snare that just sounds way too harsh. not like the others u know? but other than that, this a f00kin nice ass production

This is really good. A little empty-sounding and monotonous perhaps...I basically agree with what State of Matter said. Make it sound a bit fuller and you're onto a winner!

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