Hey what's up! I've been working on this track for a while & I want some comments about it. I know many of you have alot of experience & are very knowledgable about trance music. Give me some tips & ideas of what to change. My style is a little similar to Ralphie B, Mesh, Airwave, & Max Graham. It's a demo version (4:28) & it's under 4MB.

Erik Mitchell - Rolling With The Punches (Demo Version)

Thank you so much for spending the time to listen!

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Nice grond work with the kick and bassline and perc. I don't know what to think of your melody though. It sounds... out of tune.

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