Bounce to the Beat.

Ditch the vocals. Or rather don't use them so much. They kind of get annoying. Otherwise, its not bad, it has all the basic elements that a song should have. My main gripe is with the vocals cos it really takes the focus away from the other sounds in the song.

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I think the vocals are the only thing good in tha tune.. the other songs are much better imho.