I tried to do something with the Naked angel (Scott Bond ft. Solarstone) remix contest and came up with the following.

http://www.xs4all.nl/~metsel/nakedangel20.mp3

But this is my first time at making music so I would like to get some feedback on this remix because I don't know where I'd made mistakes.

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woooo i like this muchos! clap could be changed or add some fx, i like the percussion and the synths are very nice, i like the seamless blending, vocal ahhhh's need some fx as they sound flat, just seems to be lacking in something, its a very very good start but u need to add more elements to it imo, beef it up aswell. this could be a very good progressive remix, also i dont like how the main lead disappears so quickly. dude, it can be huuuuuuuuge!

holy shit!

hehe
this is REALLY good
soemthing different
kind of breakbeat / tribal a little

this is a PERFECT song for a club, to be dancing to in slow motion with a girl and myst comes falling down, if u know what i mean

VERY nice and for a first track? i would think that u made like 50 to make a track like this!

this is REALLY good, dark and good

what did u make it with?

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Thanx guys, for the response. Every time I notice some small errors that I've made and things that I need to do different. Your help is very appreciated. Anyone else??

btw. Made it with Reason 2.5

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Not bad man! HAHAH! LoL at this being your first track though. You must have some prior producing experience. (Even if you didn't post a track) Cuz this didn't sound too bad. The 808 sounding kit was interesting. Overall the song is decent - missing many, many elements, but it wasn't bad. Keep it up! -Mental

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i'll listen to it later, but you know that if you put it online....you can't enter it in the contest...