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Sirocco
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Registered: Jan 2003
Location: The Seventh City (New Jersey)
Have Some Feedback on This LAND DWELLER work in progress?

im kinda stuck on this track which i want to finish..got any ideas where i can take it?

Land Dweller - From the Open Heart


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Fractal
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Registered: Jul 2003
Location: Charleroi

Nice percussions,but I don't like this "beep...beep..."at all.
And I think you shold add more instruments.
Well as you said,it's just in progress,so you'd better finish it
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burns
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Registered: Apr 2001
Location: uK

Cooolio, 320

Firstly, the bleep is kool, but i would only use it in that small breakdown, sounds correct there if you like in there, rather than when the beat is playing. I think the filtered percussion is sitting to far back in the mix also.

Add some effects, make more changes in the percussion layout, drum patterns, make things more interesting. The small breakdown rocks, love that backround sample and the bleep works there, but then its kinda a let down when the beat kicks back in with that bleep, maybee add a bassline here, more perc, and dont use that bastard bleep with the drums, hehe. Good backbone but try making what you have more detialed and interesting rather than making the track longer, then work on structure.

Take care

Buuuuursnki

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