id appreciate any feedback/suggestions

dj tarantado - Forever Onward

you can't get a feedback ,because geocities don't host mp3 files

ok...tell you the truth, it works just fine for me, but this isn't the first time ive heard someone complaining about geocities...anyone know where i can post this up so everyone can give a listen?

how about if you click on my website and download the song from there? in the meantime, ill be looking around for a place to post my song.

try this link:

dj tarantado - Forever Onward

IMHO.. more bass... dunno about the echo on the kicks .. not my style.. throw in a fat sounding kick (with no echo).. the gameboy-ish sound which comes in at around 1:10 i think makes the tune sound a bit old.

but your layering of pads etc are great.. it's mainly lacking in the beat/bass department.

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the percussion is really good. but the bass string really overpowers it.

it sounds like the entire track has been sent through a lot of delay. if i remember correctly, when a lot of reverb or delay is applied to a sound, the sound seems to move into the background.

there also isn't a lot of high frequencies. i think more high frequencies would make it more exciting, less muddled.