Hi ,
Well,as you're a newbie on TA and in music producing (like I was sometimes ago) I will make some comments about your music.
First of all... WELCOME!
Now I'm listening to "DayDream"...Hmm it's evident,that you're beginner...Leads that comes at 0:13 (Oh my God!)I can't find the word to describe this
Ok...What kind of software do you use to create THIS sound ?I think you must work a lot with synth programming...All your instruments are too simple.Your track could be a great hit in 1980's or something like that,but as we're in 2003,this sound is out of date.So try different experements with your synths.When you'll be able to make some FAT sounds,your tracks will be much better
You know,makeing music is not something we do at once. You have to work a lot of time to obtain good results.But all is possible and all you need now is patience.
Good luck!
>>Max<<

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That's cool. I listened to Day Dream also.

Things you need to do.
1. Find some better percussion samples. Especially the kicks. The standard fruity kicks are not the greatest.

2. Your song needs a bassline. This will fill the mix out more. If you have a bassline, I apologise, but I can not hear it.

3. Get a decent VSTi synth. There are plenty out there. I'm not full of knowledge about VST synths, but I think pro-53 is popular. V-Station, Absynth, Vaz2010, z3ta+, FM-7, Atmosphere, and a lot more are also very good.

It takes quite a while to get decent at making tracks so stick to it. Persistance pays off. And don't forget to drop by the production forum if you have any questions. The guys in there are full of knowledge.

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Obviously using FruityLoops.. that program sticks out like a sore thumb if you aren't good with it. Use more reverb and other Fx.. compression.. delay.. there fun. And try to make your own sounds with fruityloops.. the sounds included are really terrible. But the composition itself for the 3 songs is pretty good... much better then when I started out.

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hey thanks a lot everyone. i'm gonna get busy

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WOOW!!! DayDream gonna be a Trance Anthem 2004 !!!
Why don't you send it out to labels ?You gonna get signed immediately!
Oh yes... Could I make a remix of this one ?

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Originally posted by Xenoid WOOW!!! DayDream gonna be a Trance Anthem 2004 !!! Why don't you send it out to labels ?You gonna get signed immediately! Oh yes... Could I make a remix of this one ?

Ehm...

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LOL. if you'r serious you can go ahead, i dunno what i need to send you tho. i'm hella clueless. if your not serious, that's funny

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You don't need to send me anything
But you should definately send your track to labels!
Try www.bonzaimusic.com...
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LOL. OK. HAHAHAHHAHAHHA

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I'd like to see the reaction of the man who listen to the demo's
He will be like that -->

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How long have you been working on DayDream ?