ok...
sorry for starting off negatively , but I feel that your track sounds like it was just put together using a lot of samples put together in fruity loops or some other sequencer. Try 1) varying your samples more 2) use actual synth instruments to make your synths (to me it sounds sample-based)

ok, with that out of the way, the samples aren't bad and it isn't arranged badly. I actually like the snare drum rolls and the samples sound cool.

Ok, on to the melody, not much to say really b/c it really isn't too much of a melodic track which makes it not sound repetitive (which is good)...

Keep working at it, and try to use some synths instruments as you'll find you'll have a far more wider variety of sounds. Also, add some fx to your track as it sounds pretty dry without them and fx would juice it up a bit and make your track seem so much more bigger

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Originally posted by kewlness ok... sorry for starting off negatively , but I feel that your track sounds like it was just put together using a lot of samples put together in fruity loops or some other sequencer. Try 1) varying your samples more 2) use actual synth instruments to make your synths (to me it sounds sample-based) ok, with that out of the way, the samples aren't bad and it isn't arranged badly. I actually like the snare drum rolls and the samples sound cool. Ok, on to the melody, not much to say really b/c it really isn't too much of a melodic track which makes it not sound repetitive (which is good)... Keep working at it, and try to use some synths instruments as you'll find you'll have a far more wider variety of sounds. Also, add some fx to your track as it sounds pretty dry without them and fx would juice it up a bit and make your track seem so much more bigger

Hey, you don't have to worry - at least your critic should help, shouldn't it?

Ah yeah, i used Reason 2.


But thanks anyway, I'll take your words in account


And, before I forget it: This one's a remix

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