Pretty good man, needs a bit more power though (compression) and you need to get your hands on a better piano. Also, get rid of that ride hi-hat.. the one that keeps plays on each 1/8.. it sounds terrible. But other then that, not too bad.

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thnx alanzo
anyone else??

greetz DJ Renco

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It's okay. Doesn't really have that much exitement or energy to it. I think its the sounds you use for your lead and pad that is the problem. They just aren't think and juicy enough. Your melody is okay, that not the problem.

Also, as said above, compression needed to make it sound thicker.

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