Well first off the composition is terrible.. try using some scales (major - whole step, whole step, half step, whole step - C Major would be C, D, E, F, G and minor - whole step, half step, whole step, whole step) the precussion is pretty good though.. but try eqing it to get the highs clearer (cutting frequencies above 17,000Hz helps) but the production itself is pretty crazy (in a good way) just work on your mastering and composition.

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