Your kick would benifit from having some higher frequencies.. and that constant hi-hat on every 1/8 needs some velocity variation.. bass isn't too bad though.. could use some Fx.. awesome synth at 1:40.. mastering is good too.. try getting some more variation in your percussion

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thats cool, i'll keep those tips in mind

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