Working on a new hard trance tune.

Not quite finished, only have up to a little after the main synth. Im just too impatient to hear what people think haha.
Any comments are very appreciated, and thanks for listening

http://www.electrocalgary.com/mp3/L..._Punishment.mp3

Im trying to think of ways to shorten the break down.. any ideas?

Okay, firstly, the vocals sound like a trailer for a movie.

I'm a big fan of acid so the intro stuff is pretty cool.

The DnB loop needs to have a little more variation in it though. It sounds like 1 bar looped over and over which is a bit boring. Presonally though, I'm not really a fan of these loops. breaks is cool but not drum and bass in a breakdown.

Also, at 5:22 when it kicks back in, I can't even hear the kick. What happened to it?

Other than that, it sounds solid but you really need to finish it before I can say anything else.

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Ok thanks for feedback.. Ill keep hacking away at this track and post it back up here when finished

ok.. starting off...
I really don't like your intro... it just pales in comparison with the rest of your track.. it was sounding very newbish

The vocals are excellent... they add a good touch to the track.. Not the biggest acid fan, but those synths were great...

I liked the breaks, good energy and vibe...

However, i think you need to work out some EQing things... The bass was barely audible at some parts of the track


Basically, my only gripes are 1) the intro, 2) EQing, mastering 3) percussion wasn't too great


work on those a bit and you'll have an awesome track

I like the energy this track carries..but I agree that the bass is lacking. work on that and I might be singing CHOON

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