hi guys,

heres something i was working on a couple of months ago, kinda forgot about it and then i found this sample on my hard drive

do you think i should finish it?any good??

http://sleepygeek.org/~oj/john/joc_demo.MP3

John

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I'd personally say nah. I don't really like the chord progression at all.

I do like the energy of the buildup though, just use a different melody =P

I like it and would finish it up.. but it would be nice if the track was in a higher bit rate so I could get a better perspective on it.

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thanks for the feedback guys

maybe ill let this one rest in peace

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I think you should finish it up. It sounds good but I'm not too sure about those PPK-ish bleeps though - I wouldn't wanna get tarnished with their shitty brush.

Seriouly though - finish!

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yea melody , redo it or give it new one.

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