anyone?

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nice build up, but overall its is only medicore to me, the melody has nothing special to it. but you sure do have some talent.

Begining of track =

Bassline =

Buildup/Break =

After Break =

Think i will have a go at remixing this one now. Perhaps some more sounds and another synth with another melody at/after the break.

Thanks

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ok:

the bassline and "first" techy synth have to little power. more power, different sound would be great. and the synth that comes in 1:50 is.. to bouncy in notes. there's no "real" structure in it.

i like the 1/4 after the breakdown i finished. then, it just goes way "beyond control" :P i'd say, work more on that melody, change some sounds and add alot: fx, more pads (ambience pads), more perc and hats...

otherwise it's orignal, which is great! so do remix it, and post when finished

its nice ...
2 tell u the truth the tune is boring
the problem is u bilt up the whole track from one melody/syns
and the bass is 2 flat ...i think u need 2 make it more jumpy or somthing

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Pretty decent. I'm only giving it a quiet listen because I can't find my headphones and my roommates are sleeping, but I think the bassline sounds pretty decent (though it probably needs more sub-bass).

As others have said, this needs a lot more elements to it. Sub-melodies, effects, etc.

Has potential though, good job.

like it gimme the remix