Thats the exact club trance im used to hear at shitty clubs in here. sorry man , but im really no fan of this kind of music...Ill give ya a review anyway tho.


Cool beepy synth at the beggining, loved the kind of scot project bass you got going there...
This beepy synth keeps going until like 1:22, it gets abit repettive by then, and this synth actually get alittle bit anoyying after awhile.
When the break came i really expected to hear something new there, exept the harder bass, but then again the same bleeping synth came in at the same pattern..., you definatly over used that sound, and my ears got tierd of hearing the same sound/melody for allmost 3 minuts.
Then the new synth comes in, a nice change, but the melody stays the same..

And then thos synths comes back in...

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Thank you for your comments, even though they werent that good - but those kinda comments are necessary i think!
anyways here is another version.
Pretty much all still the same - except for one more synth part!
check it @

www.montalray.de/x2.mp3

Cant wait for your oppinion DJ KREING

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Hmm...I think the song is...well...

Honesty, I don't like this at all. The first synth SOUNDS were cool, but I didn't like the melody at all. Has that 'Tunnel Trance Force' feel to it, that I try to keep my distance from nowadays.

I usually have an open mind to most music - I don't like this at all.

The bass seems like it dischords with that melody - which is pretty annoying to me. The Scot Project Bass is phat, and so are the kicks. The melody is just...not good - it doesn't do it for me.

I'm not trying to be mean or arrogant - just stating my opinion.

But like I say in all my posts, do not see this as a reason to stop. Keep making this SOUND if it makes you feel good. Perhaps you like happy melodies - well technically, your a great producer. I think you know how to use those knob controls, synths, effects, etc. etc. etc. I recommend you stick to what your doing, without changing - do not change if you do not want to. BE YOURSELF! I'm out. -Mental

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Thanks guys for your comments even though none of them were so positive @ all, but (lol) thats ok with me. Critic is always good.
@ Tranzmental: Thank you for your comment a lot, this is a critic i can work and live with lol. And thanks for saying that technically everything is still good. Everybody loves that one rough bassline (including myself of course) but i didnt (yet) want to make a song with ONLY this bassline cause then it wouldnt match with the rest of the song i think. But i ll use it in future productions. (and believe me it was a damn hard work to create a bassline like that)
So long ... have a nice one everybody!
Ciao Philipp

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I'll try to be online regularly, and listen to most of the productions here. I think everybody deserves a fair chance - it's tough to review, because the process itself takes a lot of time, and effort to arrange the ideas, for the post.

I don't mind, since I like to write, and type on computers.

By the way, I think you have many good ideas. Although you may have a different style that I listen to, It would be a lie to say you are a bad producer. Like I said you are good technically.

I respect producers who stick with "their" sounds, when they want to stick with their sounds. If your tired of your sound, then try to find a new one, but only change your sound because you WANT TO!

That's why I respect people like Wim, "Lightworks", or even Santiago Nino. Santiago doesn't get many replies to some of this threads, but he knows that his sound is great, and works for him. I'm a fan of Santiago Nino, and so are many others - it's just that some people here aren't too fond of Techno.

With that said, and done, I wish the best for you! Don't stop producing! (Like I say to many!!!) -Mental

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This track SOUNDS amazing. The kick, both types of basses, the synths - very nicely done and definitely give that tunnel trance feel you were probably going for.

Like someone else has pointed out though, you should give the lead a bit of a break. It becomes a bit monotonous after awhile as it seems to just play through the whole song. Also, I'm not sure if I'm the biggest fan of the melody pattern..like I said, it's a killer sound for this type of tune, but it's a little too plain and simple for me. Maybe try mixin it up a bit if you're still working on this tune.

Overall...production is definite quality, nice job. Just a couple things to change with the musical aspect of it.