Any Poets out there? Post your works here, Or post your favorite ones. I recently got back on the poetry thing after many years after finding Lawrence's new book.

yeah i do some writing myself, not a huge thing tho
just a way to vent
mah stuff

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*chica chica chica* slim vivid
hi kids do u like violence
night silent till u wake from blarrin sirens
thugs clubs and bleeding tyrants
fuck with the wrong ta alliance till flames start firin
my posts have turned weak i got no paddle and im up the creek
and the mods have already suspended me for more then a week
and swamper says: "Vivid ur too offensive"
nuh uh
"well i almost puked from ur last post and i only glanced it"
well since twelve ive been indulged in my self
found a bottle of pills on the shelf and shared them with noone else
got mashed,crashed grinned and laughed
till i triped out and watched my personality split in half
I drink a 40 of heineken, lose my sense of self again
post photoshopped pics and vids until tigerclaw starts panickin
fuck ninjars (wait a minute vivd, u dont want to get them mad!)
I dont give a fuck I start all the ta fads!

Hi my name is who my name is huh my name is
*chica chica chica* slim vivid!

Last edited by Vivid Boy on Nov-08-2003 at 23:31

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Originally posted by Vivid Boy *chica chica chica* slim vivid hi kids do u like violence night silent till u wake from blarrin sirens thugs clubs and bleeding tyrants fuck with the wrong ta alliance till flames start firin my posts have turned weak i got no paddle and im up the creek and the mods have already suspended me for more then a week and swamper says: "Vivid ur too offensive" nuh uh "well i almost puked from ur last post and i only glanced it" well since twelve ive been indulged in my self found a bottle of pills on the shelf and shared them noone else got mashed,crashed grinned and laughed till i triped out and watched my personality split in half I drink a 40 of heineken, lose my sense of self again post photoshopped pics and vids until tigerclaw starts panickin fuck ninjars (wait a minute vivd, u dont want to get them mad!) I dont give a fuck I start all the ta fads! Hi my name is who my name is huh my name is *chica chica chica* slim vivid!

Nice.

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Originally posted by mezzir What is love? I haven’t felt it in a while. What is love? Is it worth that extra mile? What is love? Is it equal to commitment? What is love? Why does it fuel resentment? What is love? Is every human capable? What is love? Is this feeling inescapable? What is love? Why is it so mysterious? What is love? Why is it making me delirious? What is love? Will I feel this once again? What is love? Does it act as I intend? What is love? Am I better off without it? What is love? Is my vision simply clouded?

Over use of "What is love". IMO repeat it more than 2 or 3 times gets annoying.

Roses are red
violets are blue
i hate poems that don't rhyme







*everyone snaps fingers*

Roses are red
violets are blue
I hate poo and so do you

that is priceless eric...i can't stop laughing. although that avatar pic always makes me laugh anyway

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Originally posted by notelfreak man i can't believe i tried to come off as responsible in that other thread, i am so full of shit just don't tell anyone

dis is me


DONT BE HATIN!!!

YO YO I BE REPPIN THE STREETS HOMIEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!

hhaa found a drunkin poem i wrote a long time ago thought id share





my lifeis the reason why i nead a new season
my freedom and reason
oh jesus please read this
suffered for treason oh give me a good reason to live on
listen i need a good raeason to live on
suffering by the cross all seems to be lost
but my fate is up in a toss i turn and i toss
held down bya boss who is the real cause
of why my life rots and i fight at all cost
and im tanghled ina knot oh give me a good reason to live on
listen i need a good reason to live on
everyone whi i put trust in at one point ive fought them
lost in temptation i fail to the ultimate examination
but i lose thru frustration lost all concentration
oh god give me a reason to live on
listen i need a good reason to liveon
the ones who love me die just to hug me
put i push them shove them when they try to rub my hate away
I trust them i love them so please let them see the next day
awake in my bed thoughts in my head piercing my minds edge like bullets tipped with lead
i need a good reason to live on
listen i need a good reason to live on
i lie and i cry tears not from my eyes but inside
i try and get by oh god give me a sign a time or a place
every line and rhymne i strive for my life but never ahead oif the race
oh god give me a reason to live onl
isten i need a reason to live on