could it be any better?
perhaps give dj sammy a ring for some tips tho

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This post is better than your post

Let me guess... fruityloops?

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Oh dear...

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it's a good track, but there's some elements I don't like. The lead you have in the buildup and after I don't like, but the piano is very good I think. The synth that comes in at 2:20 is really sweet though Pads are nice too!

If you added a bassline with better drive and got rid of that lead I was talking about you'd have a very good track I think, so keep working on it

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i'm gonna say i don't like it...

just because you spammed the entire forums about your song

found it cheesy, needs more depth to it or something, the first half before you introduce that piano sounds like it would fit well in an old atari video game.

its needs layers, fast.

Negative comments are very welcome...

But hey, I only posted it in two forums (this and the music one)! Is this really spamming?

But in any case, I am sorry, and I won't do it again. Next time I will only post it in the Amateur Music producers forum...

Thanks.

Attac: Can you tell me which exactly lead you don't like? The one that dominates before and after the piano?

that's the one that i find makes it cheesy if that helps