|
OKee, I think this clip is to rough for trance.
1-, Their is no story involved in this clip.
2-, The images are to easy, it's all stock material and so it's only a edditing process which i think it's lame.
3-, about the edditing sequence: it's to messed up.
A lot of images doesn't have any relation with the images before and after 'a' image. The only relationship is that it's all war/disasters and stuff. Where is your story-line? it isn't their. Their isnt a buld up to.
You had to combine images better, thats my opinion.
On the beginning you start with the trees and the bird. after that it's just disaster.....you had to do more with the bird and the trees in the beginning.
The 3 inserts (the tree little screens on the bottomleft) of the robot movements are sooooo lame, sorry to say it but it's to fake.
You had to use more electric stuff.
To mush images doens;t have any relationship with the title of the track.
___________________
Allemaal gelul!!
|