ok... the intro needs to be finished, so skip that and go straight to 0:33. and the synth part after the first melody needs to be changed a little...

http://home.wanadoo.nl/bob.nickson/manymiles.mp3


tell me what you think.

btw.. this one is supposed to sound more like the version rank1 played at TE.

Robert

Well Robert, i really like this one as i said earlier
You are right about the two things that needs to be changed a little, but the soundquality is really, really good anyways. Keep up the good work..

Peace

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what the hell are you using to make this? the synth sounds cool!

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i used reason and a keyboard to play it on. what synth do you mean? btw i added the intro now.

the part after the strings.. the deeper strings sound nice
*grunt* I need reason!, hmm a keyboard would be nice too lol

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you mean the one that starts at 1:21 ? its the same strings but i just but the a filter up a little higher

Buy a decent analogue synth, nothing ll beat the feeling of real buttons and full control

good idea! you give me $$$!

This sounds really good. I wish I could make tracks that sound like this... But sadly I can't
The "bell" melody is little boring though I think. I don't really like the sound. Maybe that was the sound you wanted but I would've like a little softer analog sound on it. And make the echo a little longer on it and don't keep it so close. Echo in 1/6 instead.

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bell sound? what bell sound? echo 1/6? how do you know what im echoing at now?

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Originally posted by trancenation bell sound? what bell sound? echo 1/6? how do you know what im echoing at now?

1. the dinging synth which comes in near the end
2. he was suggesting an echo time which might sound better than what he heard.

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