Hi guys!

I've finished a new tune called " Inside My World ", much more energetic than my last tunes. Oh and a link to " Genesis " 192kb!
Any Comments would be more than appreciated .
Thanks in advance!

EM.

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IMW = **DEAD LINK**
EM - Genesis (Original Mix) 192

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Last edited by EternalMusic on Feb-01-2004 at 10:17

Very nice sound and melody you have going. The kick is a little weak I feel, though, and the lead is a bit overpowering as a result of that. Work on the bass response, and maybe make the hi hats less prominent as well. Good work.

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Most recent tracks:
1) Ilan Bluestone - Spheres (State of Matter Eleventh Hour Mix)
2) MK-S - Illuminate (State of Matter Revival Mix)
3) Scarab - Vagabond (State of Matter Revival Mix)
4) Ferry Corsten & The Thrillseekers - Sublime (State of Matter Revival Mix)
5) State of Matter - Saving Icarus (Original Mix)

https://soundcloud.com/stateofmattermusic

Thanks SOM, i'll take that in mind

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Inside my world is really energetic, alot more powerful than your previous works, love the main melody. though i really think you should work on the bass and the intro.
But overall its a great tune, amazing work as always

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surely more energetic then u'r previus work
the kick is 2 strong !!!!
nice bass line ! its sounds grate .. i also like the brake strings...
melody is good... but i didnt like the FX u'r used in the intro they do not sound conected 2 the track

nice overal...u should work abit more on this one...

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Thanks again !

Anyone else maybe..?

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EM - Inside my World

Did you edit the kicks after State of the Matter said it was too weak? I find them a bit STRONG, but good enough for my tastes.

One thing I have to say is this. The melody isn't bad at all, and it has this 'Amara' feel to it! I actually used to enjoy this kinda stuff in 2001/2002. (Amara - Nimbus/Intrinsic, check those tracks out!)

Wasn't 100% fond of those 'plucked' synths at around 3:37, that slowly fade in. But, I love the synths that come in and help them out. I personally would add FX to those plucked synths - either Filters, or some crazier effects.

That's all I gotta say! I wish you the best!

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Thanks tranzmental, wasnt sure about the pluck either i'll check some FXs, anyway thanks!

EM.

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I think they're both Nice Tunes, love the melody in genesis but I prefere Inside my world,
Nice tunes, good work :-)

Means the world to me thanks!
Cheers, EM.

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I loved it!
I really liked the strings

The bass was pretty loud, but that was ok

Good job!

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