AlexPea - Meaning Of Life

@ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/alexpeamusic.htm

Give it a listen

Feedback is welcome, because I'd like to progress!

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Well,this track reminds me my 1st productions But I'd say that it's not so bad for the beginner. It sounds like dance track of early 90's.
Try to experiment with your instruments to make a more huge sound. The sound here is too simple for the modern trance...
Hey,and what's the 20sec silence in the end ?
Good luck !

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Originally posted by alexpea AlexPea - Meaning Of Life @ http://www.soundclick.com/bands/3/alexpeamusic.htm Give it a listen Feedback is welcome, because I'd like to progress!

not bad, shows some potential. my advice would be (and this is just the way i like things might not necessarily apply to you) to tone down your melodies a bit, bring them a little closer to the rest of the song rather than letting them take over. by this i mean to take just a few notes and spread them out over the beat rather than a constant array of notes very close together. this will free up some space to play around with other elements. research some new percussion sounds, and experiment with different percussion lines. this will give you a more robust sound and make your music more danceable.

- musashi