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Vermont
tranceaddict in training

Registered: Jan 2004
Location: Kaiserslautern

I Need Your Help!

Hello to you all,

i`ve got some older, half-finished tunes and i need to know if i should finish these...dunno if the melody is ok or not...perhaps i heared it toooooo many times.hehe

first one:
http://www.verite-records.com/vermont-projekt37.mp3

second:
http://www.verite-records.com/vermont-projekt61.mp3

third:
http://www.verite-records.com/vermont-frommyheart.mp3

Best Wishes and a Happy New Year

Cya
Vermont

Last edited by Vermont on Jan-04-2004 at 01:24

Jan-04-2004 01:18 Germany

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djjeesh
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Registered: Feb 2003
Location: Minnesota

finish the third one.

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tranzMental
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Registered: Mar 2002
Location: Miami, Florida

Finish the 3rd one. Not too fond of the first 2, but if you like that style keep it up. -Mental

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Tranc3
tranceaddict in training

Registered: May 2002
Location: Santa Cruz, CA, US

"Projekt 37" has the cheesy feel throughout, reminds me of the mid-90s.

"Projekt 61" carries over a bit of that same feel, plus the lead itself doesn't really feel as if it goes anywhere.

"From my heart" has more modern-sounding synths, which is definitely a plus. The strings sound a bit dull, adding to the cheese factor. You might want to consider either changing the lead (it sounds as if it's slowing down the piece...almost as if it's struggling to keep up with the percussive elements), or adding in some counterpoint with shorter notes (giving it a bit of a faster feel).

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State of Matter
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Registered: Aug 2003
Location: Maryland, USA

I like the third one, nice pads, kind of whiney sounding. Good ideas melodically, some of the harmony could be shaped better.

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