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Hey there,
The sound at 40 seconds doesn't do it any favours as it seems out of tune.
The first melody reminds me of the theme tune to 'Assault on precinct 13' which is actually a good thing as it's a classic melody used by electro artists in the 80's.
The whole percussion part needs beefing up in my opinion and you may also want to fill out with a bass melody.
You have some very nice harmonies at work in the track but I would say that it definately needs work on beefing up the whole thing as it does tend to sound a little empty.
On the brink is a good title for it as the harmonies give rise to lots of thoughts that could match the theme.
The sound is nice and crisp.
What are you using by the way?
Nice little piece that I feel has a lot of potential, keep at it my friend.
Cheers
Nem
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