tribu - untitled

To any one kind enough to take a listen, not sure what kind of style this is....used some free plugins, some samples, and wah lah. Please leave comments, but most importantly criticisms, which is what truly makes us all better, and i will do the same for you...

Can anyone please give me some kind of evaluation on this? i will only bump this once

This is really difficult for me to write comments on as I'm not too familiar with this style, but I'll try my best to come up with something useful.

Ok, what you have is good. I especially liked the snare roll and the step up in melody and percussion at 0:38. The background melody fits in very well. I dunno if that's a bassline coming in at 0:57, but I can hear some kinda bassier sound - whatever it is I think needs to be more prominent. I think it would also benifit immensely from thicker sounding strings.

But with that said I still think it's very interesting stuff. Keep it up and post more!

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