The first part sounds good. No real problems here imo.

At the break I think you should have a little less delay on the guitar. The melody is really good tho.

The guitar is maybe a little too low in the main part.

I think this one is better than Citrus Source. A little more "trancy" Keep it up!

Sounds okay, although it is a tad boring to my tastes. The melody repeats and there aren't a whole lot of instruments added or taken away during the course of the track. Not a bad production by any means though!

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bass sounds ok, subbass too
guitar is cool, fresh and summer-ish, other synths sound pro too.
Same comment as previous tho, the melody gets a bit boring towards the end.
nice work !

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hey vizay

i liked your other track last time.

about this, mastering is poor here.

intro wasn't keen about it, needs more, the second synth that comes in the intro, not a fan of that.

guitar is really nice with the acids.

pads are ok, but they sound a bit thin.

this track really needs drive, and if you tighten up the kick bass and clap, it will be alot better i think.

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Last edited by Massive84 on Aug-04-2004 at 09:59

hey
#1 suggestion is mastering, u cant really hear the clap, the percs are too trebly, the kick is too weak and is acting as a bass kind of, as for structure and everythign esle u know what ur doing, u just gotta master the mastering but dont give up, practice makes perfect

peace out

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well as a matter of a fact I can master my mastering, I just havent done it yet (as I wrote in my first post)

I'm a bit fucked up in my ears today so if I start the mastering right now it will prolly sound like shite so I'm saving it for tomorrow

have some ideas about some things I wanna change too so it doesn't get as repetitive as it is now

stay tuned for another update on the track soon

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I've updated the track now, read more in the first post

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w00t
MUUUUUUUCh better quality
very clear now, the percs the clap bass and kick, and sounds
lol, how drunk were u when u made it the firs time?
i love the boom at 3:26, damn its so loud and beautifal
well thats that, gr8 track,
peace out

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Originally posted by Sunquest w00t MUUUUUUUCh better quality very clear now, the percs the clap bass and kick, and sounds lol, how drunk were u when u made it the firs time? i love the boom at 3:26, damn its so loud and beautifal well thats that, gr8 track, peace out

hehe I was actually sober
but usually when I work with my tracks I do the mixing while creating the track so it takes it's place at the same time as the creating of different instruments and such...

when I redid the mixing now I took the mainpart of the track and reworked it from there

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Hej..... Skitbra låt...Opps sorry in english

I really like this track... Its dreamy, mellow but has that elegant touch of roughness at the same time.... I have to agree with NooN, a little less delay on the guitar wouldn't hurt...

Over all this is a good track, keep it up...

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hmm, not a bad one...