well that link won't work will it. Am posting proper link so I can save target as

link

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Intro melody is cool, lead could do with a bit of eq to brighten up the highs, although I guess this is an oldie so you aren't going to change anything now.

Nice use of the piano, and everything folds in quite well. A bit of mudiness going on here, but I really like your ideas.

Breakdown synths are nice, cool pad. Breakdown is a bit long though (i fast forwarded). i think this would sound heaps better if you could hear the lead more clearly. some eq would do wonders here.

Nice track, cool melody (i think), its kind of hard to make out.

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Originally posted by hey cheggy well that link won't work will it. Am posting proper link so I can save target as link

Sorry Guys.

Thanx for fixing the link and reviewing the track, Cheggy. I've corrected the link in my original posting, too!


Greetz,

TheMixMaster

Hot damn! Bouncy as and very nice, your lead is moreish and pumping. I agree with Cheggy though, there is a bit of muddyness there, sort that and you're laughing. Also agree on the breakdown, maybe just something to occupy you like little drum patterns or something.

Feeling that build back in tho. Got a good dark edge to it. Like the kick off, keeps on building very nicely. This is good man, really good. Just wish I could hear that lead a bit more cos it makes this tune, the pads although very beautiful seem to drown it out a tad.

Don't give up on this one dude, it's got something, just a couple of tweaks and it's there. Second break is nice.

EDIT: Second time around now, flippin love this track mate!!! Beautiful.

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Last edited by BassAngel on Jan-17-2004 at 19:30

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Originally posted by BassAngel Just wish I could hear that lead a bit more cos it makes this tune, the pads although very beautiful seem to drown it out a tad. EDIT: Second time around now, flippin love this track mate!!! Beautiful.

Thanx for reviewing the track! I appreciate all of your suggestions! I try to fix the melody by eq'ing a little bit. Let's see what I can make out of it.

Go for it!!!! ;-)

Greetz,

TheMixMaster