Not bad but you def need to work on getting more out of your synths, use FX and filters to improve the overall sound. The percussions needs some more hats to beef it and claps on the 2nd & 4th beats. Sound like you have rev claps there, a trick I often use to add some drive. But this is best used with these just before 2nd & 4th beats AND normal claps on the beats. The claps on your breakbeat seem to loud, snare would be better in any case. Also the kick pattern seem a little too eratic for this style. Pads seem ok but could be louder. Keep at it.

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thanx for the reply
seems like ur the only one that ever replies to my stuff hehe

actually the clap isnt a reverse
i used the screamer device
so it makes the beets distorted a little
which makes the claps come in a little late
thats what it is
but anyways ill try to fix it then
thanx again

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Originally posted by Dj-Gingi thanx for the reply seems like ur the only one that ever replies to my stuff hehe

not the only one ! me 2 !

first of all why is it so short ?????

*eny way as RaverBabySy seid u need 2 work on u'r synths ...try 2 make them more ravey and add all kinds of FX's on chanels ...like reverb...delay...mabe a fasher would be nice...
*i have notice that u'r strings are very nice..
*the piano like instrument is nice but i would make it more dark or deep

that is about all i can think of right now !..cheers

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