any comments?

It sounds a lot like airwave. Maybe too much so. If I just heard this on the radio I would have thought it was a remix. Not sure what you can do about that, but it might be a problem.

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Originally posted by davedresden oh my fucking god i die, dave

Well im not gonna do anything with it (label wise) so its not to much of a problem, I checked the progressions againts airwaves and none of them are exactly the same, its the way it goes down, then back thats similar, i may take it offline, depends.!

Definitely too much Airwave sound there. The bassline progression is almost exactly the same, which compliments the pads that also have a very similar melody. Maybe make this an Airwave remix?

Your superstrings also have way too much attack, its kind of annoying, they should be more impaling.

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I thought Rank 1 made this?

Well maybe not, but you and the others are right it sounds very much alike.

Sort out the bass at the start you have duff notes hear and there that don't match the pad and sound out of tune.

Darrax...

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I decided, to much like airwave! So ill take it offline in a bit, RIP sufferings puropse lol

cheers for your comments anyway guys!

--Alex