First thing I would say is that you need to sort out your levels on the percussion vs synths. All I get is a mass of melody and virtually no rythm except some distorted hi hats. Perhaps it was intentional but in my opinion, if it was it's not working for the track.

Great melodies though, very nice and atmospheric.

Cheers
Nem

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 First thing I would say is that you need to sort out your levels on the percussion vs synths. All I get is a mass of melody and virtually no rythm except some distorted hi hats. Perhaps it was intentional but in my opinion, if it was it's not working for the track. Great melodies though, very nice and atmospheric. Cheers Nem

it was not meant for a club. I think the levels are more aprreciable if you think of it that way.

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Originally posted by Nemesis44 First thing I would say is that you need to sort out your levels on the percussion vs synths. All I get is a mass of melody and virtually no rythm except some distorted hi hats. Perhaps it was intentional but in my opinion, if it was it's not working for the track. Great melodies though, very nice and atmospheric. Cheers Nem

See, I felt it jazzy, and euphoric primarily because the Four-To-The-Floor get so completely lost. In the second half of the song I could see a stronger kick if I ever even attempted to shuffle some feet : ) I like the overmastered, buried kick feel in that song. I don't really know why. Maybe sometime I'll add in better Perc.

Thanks for the feedback
-Eric

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